Written By: Johnnathan Alcala
Storyboards By: Kevin Schoenherr
Camera: Zoom In, OTS
Description: Dmitry walks over to Pavel.
Camera: MS, OTS
Description: Dmitry kneels down.
Dialog: Dmitry - "What's up Nephew?""Pavel? What's wrong?"
Camera: CU
Description: Pavel hands pink slip sheet to Dmitry.
Camera: MCU
Camera: MS, OTS
Dialog: Dmitry - "Well based on what your parents did to you the last time
you were fired, I'm glad you came to me. Come on, let's go inside."
Camera: Medium/Full Shot
Description: Dmitry and Pavel sit at the kitchen table drinking coffee.
Pavel starts talking to Dmitry about his concerns.
Camera: CU
Description: Dmitry suggest that him and Pavel should go on trip to the mountains.
Camera: CU
Description: Pavel stands up in excitement.
Camera: MS, Dissolve Out
Description: Pavel runs over to Dmitry and hugs him.
Camera: Environmental Shot, Pan
Camera: LS
Camera: FS
Description: Dmitry and Pavel get on snowmobile.
Camera: FS
Description: Snowmobile takes off.
Camera: MS
Description: Dmitry and Pavel stop for a cigarette break and Dmitry could not find his lighter.
Pavel asks if they should head back.
Camera: CU
Description: Dmitry and Pavel head back. They start to become cold.
Camera: ECU
Camera: CU
Description: Pavel yells at Dmitry for not checking
the gas tank and begins to panic.
Camera: CU
Camera: OTS, Fade Out
Description: It's night time. Both Pavel and Dmitry are hungry. Pavelthen asks Dmitry for a favor to help hang himself. Dmitry tells Pavelnot to think like that. Afterwards the two began to fall asleep.
Camera: Fade In, CU
Description: It's becomes morning and Dmitry starts waking up.
Camera: ECU
Description: We see an extreme close-up shot of Dmitry's eyes in shock.
Camera: Zoom Out
Description: We zoom out of Dmitry and see Pavelfrom a distance hanging from a tree.
Camera: MS
Camera: CU
Description: Dmitry turns his head and spots a scarf on the ground near him.
Camera: FS
Description: We see Dmitry standing in a tree tying the scarf on one of it's branches.
Camera: MS
Description: Dmitry ties the other end of the scarf around his neck and looks over at Pavel.
Camera: FS, Pan Down
Description: Dmitry's looks at Pavel's body.
Camera: FS
Description: Wolves start surrounding Pavels body from the ground.
Camera: FS
Description: Dmitry starts lifting up his leg and jumps right off...
Camera: Medium/Full shot
Description: ...then falls and is hanged
Camera: Zoom Out, Fade Out to White
Description: The two bodies still hanging as the camera moves away from them.
Pretty good work. These boards definitely get the story across pretty well. Shots 10-12 need better transitions. Overall a lot more shading and detail would be better, but the shot descriptions and camera placement works well.
ReplyDeleteThe beginning could use a little more exposition / title card?